GMAT考试写作指导：Issue写作范文五三

53. If one focuses on systems such as financial services and telecommunications, where
emerging technologies have the greatest impact, one sees increasing user-friendliness.
However, in other systems—public and private alike—inefficiencies, roadblocks, and
other "unfriendly" features still abound¹. One such example is the U.S. health-care
delivery system.
      To a large extent, the user-unfriendly nature of health-care delivery stems from its
close tie to the insurance industry. Service providers and suppliers inflate² prices,
knowing that insurance companies can well afford to pay by passing on inflated³ costs to
the insured. Hospital patients are often discharged prematurely⁴ merely because
insurance fails to cover in-patient care beyond a certain amount or duration. In the
extreme, patients are sometimes falsely informed that they are well or cured, just so that
the facility can make room for insured patients. Insurance providers reject claims and
coverage⁵ intentionally⁶ and in bad faith when the insured has suffered or is statistically⁷
likely to suffer from a terminal or other long-term and costly—illness. Insurance
companies also impose extreme coverage exceptions for pre-existing conditions. Both
tactics are designed, of course, to maximize insurance company profits at the expense of
the system's user. Finally, new medical technologies that provide more effective
diagnosis⁸ and treatment are often accessible only to the select few who can afford the
most comprehensive insurance coverage.
      The consequences of these user-unfriendly features can be grave indeed for the
individual, since this system relates directly to a person's physical well-being⁹ and very
life. For example, when a claim or coverage is wrongfully denied, lacking financial
resources to enforce their rights, an individual customer has little practical recourse. The
end result is to render health care inaccessible¹⁰ to the very individuals who need it most.
These user-unfriendly features can be deleterious on a societal scale as well. An
unhealthy populace is an unproductive one. Also, increased health-care costs place an
undue¹¹ burden on bread-winning adults who feel the squeeze of caring for aging parents
and for children. Finally, these features foster a pervasive¹² distrust of government, big
business, and bureaucracy.
      In sum, today's "point-and-click" paradigm¹³ inaccurately¹⁴ portrays¹⁵ the actual
functionality of many systems, including our health-care delivery system, which is well-
entrenched in self-interest and insensitivity to the needs of its users.