GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(一零八)

108. “Employees should not have full access to their own personnel files. If, for example, employees were allowed to see certain confidential¹ materials, the people supplying that information would not be likely to express their opinions candidly².”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.
The issue is whether employees should have full access to their own personnel files. The speaker claims that they should not, pointing out that such access could diminish the condor³ of those supplying information. To some extent, I agree with this viewpoint. Although employees are entitled to be accurately⁴ informed about the substance of performance reviews or complaints in their files, at times there will be good reason not to identify information sources.
First of all, employers have a right to control some information pertinent⁵ to (adj. 与..有关的) their business success. Unproductive or uncooperative workers can seriously harm an organization; for this reason, employers need to have accurate information about employee performance. But when employees have full access to their own personnel files, co-workers and even supervisors⁶ will often find it difficult to give frank criticism of underachievers (n. 成就过小者,在学业方面未发挥潜力的学生) or to report troublemakers⁷. So although employees have legitimate⁸ claims to know what has been said about them, they are not always entitled to know who said it.
Secondly⁹, employers are obligated to control some information when their employees are accursed of unlawful conduct. Since employers are responsible for wrongdoing (不正当行为；坏事) at the workplace, they must investigate charges of, for example, drug activity, possession of firearms, or harassment¹⁰. But again, without assurances of anonymity¹¹, accusers may be less forthright¹². Furthermore, they may be in jeopardy¹³ of retaliation¹⁴ by the accused. So while workers under investigation¹⁵ may be generally informed about complaints or reports, they should not know who filed them. Even so, employers do not enjoy an unlimited¹⁶ right to gather and keep confidential information about employees. For example, it would be unjust to investigate an employee’s political viewpoints, religious preference, or sexual orientation¹⁷. Such invasions of privacy are not warranted by an employer’s right to performance-related information, or duty to protect the workplace from criminal wrongdoing.
In conclusion, limiting employee access to personnel files is sometimes warranted to encourage candor¹⁸ and prevent retaliation against information sources. At the same time, employers have no right to solicit¹⁹ or secure information about the private lives of their workers.