GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(一五二)

41. “The best way to preserve the natural environment is to impose penalties—whether fines, imprisonment¹, or other punishments—on those who are most responsible for polluting or otherwise damaging it.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion expressed above. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.

Imposing² heavy penalties on those who pollute or destroy the environment is one way to preserve our environment. But it is not the only way; nor is it the best way. Penalties may elicit³ grudging⁴ compliance⁵, but other approaches—those that instill a sense of genuine commitment—are likely to be more effective in the long term.

Admittedly, motivating compliance with environmental regulations by way of penalties will serve environmental goals up to a point. The deterrent⁶ effect of these remedies cannot be denied. Yet it should not be overstated. Some businesses may attempt to avoid punishment by concealing⁷ their activities, bribing⁸ (lobbying) legislators to modify regulations, or moving operations to jurisdictions⁹ (n. 权限,管辖区域) that allow their environmentally harmful activities. Others might calculate the trade-off (交易, 平衡) between accepting punishment and polluting, budget in advance for anticipated penalties, then openly violate the law. My intuition is that this practice is a standard operating mode among some of our largest manufacturers.

A better way to ensure environmental protection is to inculcate a sense of genuine commitment into our corporate¹⁰ culture—through education and through shareholder¹¹ involvement. When key corporate executives become committed to values, the regulations associated with those values become a codification¹² of conscience rather than obstacles to circumvent¹³. The machinations and maneuverings described earlier will thereby¹⁴ be supplanted¹⁵ by thoughtful concern about all the implications of one’s actions. Moreover, commitment-driven actions are likely to benefit the environment over and above what the law requires. For example, while a particular regulation might permit a certain amount of toxic¹⁶ effluents, businesses committed to environmental protection may avoid harmful emissions¹⁷ altogether.

Instilling¹⁸ a genuine sense of commitment through education and shareholder action is not just a better approach in theory, it is also less costly¹⁹ overall than a compliance-driven approach. Regulatory systems inherently call for legislative²⁰ committees, investigations²¹ and enforcement agencies, all of which adds to the tax burden of the citizens whom these regulations are designed to protect. Also, delays typically associated with bureaucratic²² regulation may thwart²³ the purpose of the regulations, since environmental problems can quickly become very grave.

In sum, penalties for violating environmental-protection laws are essentially²⁴ expensive band-aids (adj. 补缀的, 权宜的). A commitment-based approach, involving education and shareholder activism, can instill in corporate culture a sense an environmental conscience, resulting in far more effective environmental protection.